Reflection of draft 1

 Reflection

Looking back at my work I think I need to add in a voice during the start with the BBC One entrance as that is what BBC One do so I will try and make it as realistic as possible.

I also need to add in titles as it gives more details to viewers.

I need to look at the editing as it is a bit choppy and doesn't look right as a whole with my documentary as it adds lots of stops and starts.